Oooh... that was great! I do love Diana and Neal scenes. It was a nice change to see it from Diana's perspective. And the switch in past/present kinda teases us, giving us a little at a time.
It was interesting but also frustrating to see how you changed the finale. Despite Peter being framed, I'm glad Pratt is out of the picture. Now can we get rid of Callaway too?
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Date: 2013-07-08 04:38 am (UTC)It was interesting but also frustrating to see how you changed the finale. Despite Peter being framed, I'm glad Pratt is out of the picture. Now can we get rid of Callaway too?