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sheenianni ([personal profile] sheenianni) wrote2014-10-19 09:18 pm

White Collar Fic: Conspiracies: Revelations (Master Post)

Title: Conspiracies: Revelations
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sheenianni
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] aragarna
Word Count:
~ 49,700 in total
Characters/Pairings: Neal Caffrey, Mozzie, Peter Burke; minor cast Diana Berrigan, Elizabeth Burke, Sally, June Ellington, Reese Hughes, Satchmo, Bancroft, OCs, others; Peter/Elizabeth (off-screen), Mozzie/Sally (off-screen)
Rating: R
Content Notice: Torture, violence, trauma; mild swearing, casual homophobia (minor occurrence)
Spoilers: Minor from all seasons
Summary: When Mozzie, a brilliant scientist and law-abiding citizen, got caught in the middle of a dangerous conspiracy, he asked Neal for help. For a month, they successfully evaded their hunters… until it all went south. Suddenly Neal’s life is in peril and Mozzie is desperately searching for allies. Who is the mysterious Suit and what is Peter Burke’s role in the events? Will they expose the nefarious plot, and what will happen to the three of them before this all is over? AU.



Author's Note: This story is a direct sequel and contains numerous spoilers to my earlier work, Conspiracies , though it can be read without knowing the original story. If you haven’t read the original, proceed at your own discretion.

Acknowledgements: Honestly, I don’t think I would have been able to finish this, if not for two amazing people: [livejournal.com profile] treonb and [livejournal.com profile] nywcgirl. They were my first beta-readers, but more than that, they encouraged me to keep writing, brainstormed with me more times than I can remember, gave me new insight and just pretty much kept me going when I was ready to take an axe to my laptop and be done with it. Thank you so much, both of you!!! I also have to thank mam711 from fanfiction.net, who helped with the grammar and helped me fix a few odd places. Finally, there are the people from [livejournal.com profile] wcwu, who supported me with encouragement, ideas and WWs. Thank you all :)

The art has been done by the wonderful [livejournal.com profile] aragarna. You can give her some love here

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Prologue - On LJ | On DW
Part I - On LJ | On DW
Part II - On LJ | On DW
Part III - On LJ | On DW
Part IV - On LJ | On DW
Part V - On LJ | On DW
Part VI - On LJ | On DW
Epilogue - On LJ | On DW

[personal profile] nywcgirl 2014-10-19 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
You did it!
And the art completes the story, well done you two. It was an honour to beta your story. But as I told you, I expect timsetamps or a sequel... After you take well earned break from writing :-)

[identity profile] sheenianni.livejournal.com 2014-10-20 10:25 am (UTC)(link)
It was great having your support through the whole thing :)

***********Spoilers***********

About timestamps and sequel.... I woke up this morning thinking about this story and feeling terribly dissatisfied, because even though things got resolved somewhat, I don't think there's enough catharsis and closure. And I honestly think I need to give us a bit of that, but we're dealing with severe trauma here, and I don't want to screw it up. I have little own experience in this area, but common sense tells me you don't just wake up being okay after what the character has been through. So I guess there is a lot of research in my future about depression, anxiety, PTSD and other stuff that could be relevant before writing a sequel or some timestamps.

And I thought this was going to be a simple, somewhat humorous adventure flick... :O

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[identity profile] treonb.livejournal.com 2014-10-24 06:37 am (UTC)(link)
Not to put down Neal's upcoming travails, I'd love to see more of Mozzie and Peter :-)

[identity profile] sheenianni.livejournal.com 2014-10-24 07:00 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, there would definitely be more of Mozzie and Peter :)

You know, I think that would definitely be interesting to explore; how Peter and Mozzie's relationship would change in this universe. While they are still quite close to canon in terms of their personalities, the circumstances are completely different: Peter won't see Mozzie as the "devil on Neal's shoulder", Mozzie isn't competing with Peter for Neal as his crime buddy, and it doesn't hurt that their relationship started off with Neal's rescue. I know they're very different people on some levels, but then so are Neal and Peter. And now you have me wondering how much Peter and Mozzie's friendship could grow in this universe. Could Peter, Moz and Neal become a "gen friendship threesome" with three very different but equally strong relationships?

I need to take a break from this, and then I need to think and plan.

[identity profile] meeni (from livejournal.com) 2014-11-07 07:00 am (UTC)(link)
I really really enjoyed this..I loved Neal and Moz's first meeting and

i loved Peter and Moz's dynamics here and they rescued Neal.\o/

I'm in the queue for timestamps too:D

[identity profile] sheenianni.livejournal.com 2014-11-08 07:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :) The Mozzie-Neal first meeting and the Peter-Moz dynamics were some of my favorite parts of this story :)

Thank you for your review and I'm glad you liked this :)