ext_43512 ([identity profile] reve-silencieux.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sheenianni 2015-09-08 03:22 am (UTC)

Oh, wow. I like how you wove in canon, but one minor difference and everything changed. That was a really interesting take on how things could have gone, had Kate told him from the beginning. But I like how Peter was still there, and still cared, and hopefully, in the end will take Neal on as a CI still. Great job, especially in such a short time!

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